Flash Fiction

Bully

The floor tasted like failure for Billy, a mix of sweat and piss. The boys around him hooted with laughter.

Puny Zach stood over him, fists clenched. No one would dare harass him anymore.

© Sanch V @ Sanch Writes

Featured image by it’s me neosiam from Pexels

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  • Kirsten Britt Baltz
    4 July 2019 at 5:18 am

    That is so satisfying.

  • The Dark Netizen
    4 July 2019 at 2:09 pm

    Nicely done! Bullies deserve this!
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  • Kalpana solsi
    4 July 2019 at 8:28 pm

    The bully should be shown his place. Nicely expressed. Might is right is not right always.

  • Melony Boseley
    4 July 2019 at 8:38 pm

    Go, Zach! Love that the bully got his comeuppance!

  • Margaret
    4 July 2019 at 10:27 pm

    The switch in perspective from Billy to Zach threw me a little, but the ending was so satisfying.
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  • Katie
    5 July 2019 at 5:05 am

    Great job of telling the whole story in the micro space! I love how specific the word “hooted” is for this setting.