
I wonder
Who that woman is
The one who is mostly by my side
The one who picks me up
The minute that I cry
I wonder
Who that man is
The one with a cheeky smile
The one who helps the woman out
By staying with me at night
I wonder
Who that little girl is
The one that comes and goes
The one that talks to me non-stop
And sometimes tickles my toes
I wonder
Who that large boy is
The one with the messy clothes
The one whose words make no sense
To me and all in the home
I wonder
Who the other people are
The ones who visit me on different days
They speak gibberish to me
They really drive me insane
I wonder
When I will be able to talk
And walk away from this
To explore the world around
Away from my little crib
I wonder
What lies ahead for me
In this world so very strange
What these people mean to me
And what early memories will remain
(c) Sanch Vee @ Sanch Writes (18 April 2010)
Written for Sunday Scribblings Prompt ‘Wonder’



harini
18 April 2010 at 10:53 am:). Very well written :).
Psych Babbler
18 April 2010 at 11:00 amThank you! =)
Varsh
18 April 2010 at 11:25 amI wonder
When I’ll be able to write
In such a simple and lovely way
What I feel inside
In and about the world around me! 🙂
gautami tripathy
18 April 2010 at 1:58 pmBeautiful…
rosy mask
Titaxy
18 April 2010 at 2:47 pmSo very wonderful!
americanising desi
18 April 2010 at 4:05 pmyou ve incorporated most of the wonders 🙂
pleasure to read
Wonder Full
Sam Liu
18 April 2010 at 6:55 pmA wonderfully poetic piece. I really enjoyed reading this 🙂
PNA
18 April 2010 at 8:57 pmIt tickled somewhere..u know, because it is so well expressed PB:)
celestialrays
18 April 2010 at 10:52 pmThat’s awesome! Good imagination 🙂
Thomma Lyn
19 April 2010 at 12:01 amDelightful! What a creative and well-written exploration of the perspective of a child.
deedeekm
19 April 2010 at 3:12 amaww this is sweet – love the baby’s perspective 🙂
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:18 amI wonder when you will be able to do it Varsha! =P That was great…
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:19 amWelcome to this space! Thank you!
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:19 amThankie!! =)
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:19 amThanks AD!
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:19 amThanks Sam…glad you enjoyed it!
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:19 amThanks Pinny…
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:19 amWelcome Celestial! And thanks =)
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:21 amWelcome Thomma! And thank you for the lovely words of encouragement… =)
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:22 amWelcome DeeDee! Thanks heaps! =)
geeta232
19 April 2010 at 9:39 amSo simple yet so expressive…great piece
Psych Babbler
19 April 2010 at 9:54 amWelcome Geeta! And thank you! =)
bini
20 April 2010 at 10:48 pmIm sure all the babies of the world are loving you!-Bini..(Forgot my login info here)
Psych Babbler
21 April 2010 at 9:44 amHaha! Thanks Bini!