We used to be so close
But something got in the way
I don’t know what and I don’t know how
But from each other we began drifting away
We fought a whole lot more
Over the smallest of things
And things got harder as out of each other
The worst we would bring
We decided to mutually end it
And thought things would be better
And while they may be so
I cannot help but remember
The days when we were happy
The days when things went well
The days when we were in love
And everything was swell
I’ve come to accept it now
Months down the track
That we are better off not together
And better off not going back
Moving on is hard to do
But is something everyone goes through
All I hope for is that in the end
While we may not be in love, we will still remain friends
(c) Sanch Vee @ Sanch Writes (6 September 2009)
Guria
7 September 2009 at 1:09 pmIt’s not only alovely template. it sets the mood for the beautiful poems you have written. I am completely taken in! 🙂
Sanch, the writer
8 September 2009 at 9:59 am@ Guria: Welcome to my blog and thanks for the lovely comment! Also, thanks for the comment about the template…it’s funny because I was wondering whether I needed to change it but your comment has made me want to stick with it! 🙂 Keep visiting!
Psych Babbler
8 September 2009 at 9:59 am@ Guria: Welcome to my blog and thanks for the lovely comment! Also, thanks for the comment about the template…it’s funny because I was wondering whether I needed to change it but your comment has made me want to stick with it! 🙂 Keep visiting!
The Dialogue
16 September 2009 at 1:13 amI totally agree with Guria on the beauty of your blog template. It’s smart and pretty at the same time.
A heartwarming piece of poetry there.
Keep up the wonderful work 🙂
cheers!!
Americanising Desi
16 September 2009 at 8:02 amlovely poem 🙂
keep writing
Sanch, the writer
18 September 2009 at 10:17 pm@ The Dialogue: Thank you! 🙂
@ AD: Thanks! 🙂
Psych Babbler
18 September 2009 at 10:17 pm@ The Dialogue: Thank you! 🙂
@ AD: Thanks! 🙂
ani_aset
22 September 2009 at 1:00 pmhey its lovely PB..i think its the first time i see you write something like this..its hard to move on but thats the best thing
Nu
2 October 2009 at 3:19 amMy My PB !! You are so good at it..never noticed it 🙂 Keep writing more stuff like this… 🙂
Shankar
2 October 2009 at 6:17 amHey.. a very nice poem… The same way I felt..when I moved away..Now I feel happy that we moved away and remain friends..really a cute one..I loved it..
Reema
2 October 2009 at 1:18 pmNICE POEM!
Sanch, the writer
2 October 2009 at 11:38 pm@ Ani: It’s only a poem… 🙂 A bit of creative license here…
@ Nu: I just imported entries from my other blog which I’m closing down. I used to only have poetry on that blog. Thanks for the comment!
@ Shankar: Thanks!
@ Reema: Thank you!
@ Chetan: Thanks 🙂
Chetan
2 October 2009 at 6:32 pmhey
nice poem
i like your simple ending
Psych Babbler
2 October 2009 at 11:38 pm@ Ani: It’s only a poem… 🙂 A bit of creative license here…
@ Nu: I just imported entries from my other blog which I’m closing down. I used to only have poetry on that blog. Thanks for the comment!
@ Shankar: Thanks!
@ Reema: Thank you!
@ Chetan: Thanks 🙂
Nu
2 February 2010 at 10:55 amThis made to the final selection for voting 🙂 Good Luck
http://alchemistpoonam.wordpress.com/2010/02/02/final-nominations-in-avant-garde-bloggies-awards-2009/